A revision goes better when the current version has been read carefully. Before moving another line, sort observations from suggestions and decide which question the next draft is meant to answer for the people reviewing it.
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Processes
The order of work, including the parts that need another attempt. Notes on revisions, handovers, working versions, and deciding what to carry into the next stage.
The stories
A useful handoff can fit on a small piece of paper. Say where the work stands, explain the next step, and include the detail that would otherwise send someone looking for you before they can begin.